Thread:CorvusTheFeatherbrain/@comment-27888570-20161111205519

Just letting you know I was also editing the synopsis at the same time you were. So a lot of my entries got lost.

Fair warning: my contributions aren't exactly short and to the point, if you know what I mean. For instance, here is what I was going to add:

Divine Intervention
As the sky continues to downpour and lightning cracks, Vox Machina, weary and sore from the earlier assaults on Duke Vedmire and Count Tylieri, continues to run away from the rising army of skeletal warriors, their numbers seeming endless. Up ahead, they notice a familiar voice shout, "There! Run! Aid them!" As they near, they notice a group of ten armored villagers being led by Keeper Yennen approaching, still a hundred feet away.

Keyleth, not wanting to leave them to fight the undead army, breaks from Vax'ildan's grasp and runs back to fight. Vax and Percy immediately give chase after the druid, who drops her Call Lightning spell in favor of Flaming Sphere. Vex'ahlia, riding Trinket, arrives next to her and casts Conjure Barrage, smashing ten skeletons but sixty more close in. Keyleth throws up a Wall of Stone from underneath to elevate them ten feet up to cover the whole street. She then send the Flaming Sphere downward to funnel and "clean house". Vax and Percy arrive at the wall and climb up, with Grog and Scanlan bringing up the rear.

Now on top of the wall, Percy prepares to fire at any skeletons that get too close, but fails to notice if any undead stone giants are approaching due to poor visibility in the storm. Scanlan shouts to Grog to throw him up to the top of the wall. Vax shouts at Keeper Yennen's group to bring fire.

Keeper Yennen looks over his shoulder, the villagers parting as behind them another individual runs towards the party at full sprint, armored in plate and small in stature but glowing with a divine light. The party watches in awe as Pike Trickfoot, cleric of Sarenrae, charges towards them as Percy Vax, and Yennen reach down to help her get to the top. They all express their surprise at not only Pike's radiant and not quite solid form but also at how she's with them in the first place. Pike says that they can talk later as she notices the horde of undead. Percy fires at a skeleton climbing the wall and destroys it, shouting "Whatever you're going to do, do it!" as he takes aim at another skeleton and fires twice more with The List, the second shot felling it.

Keyleth sends her Flaming Sphere into the thick of them, incinerating and turning seven to dust and damaging a few others. Vex fires a Lightning Arrow into another cluster of skeletons, destroying the center target instantly as well as twelve more, but the horde fills in the gap with about sixty-five remaining. Grog tells Scanlan. "Go get her," as he throws the gnome onto the top of the wall. Upon reaching it, Scanlan is simply stunned at Pike's presence, distracted by her beauty but still ready to kick some ass, a sentiment which Pike happily agrees with.



Pike makes a daring leap off the wall, angelic wings shooting from her back for a split-second as she lands deep into the horde and channels Sarenrae's power to use Destroy Undead. The resulting shockwave annihilates thirty-six of them, effectively cutting the remainder of the army by half. Scanlan, thoroughly impressed with Pike, jumps off as well but due to the slickness of the wall falls short of reaching her. Seeing Pike in danger of retaliation, he casts Lightning Bolt through his crotch in an attempt to impress the cleric, the resulting thrust an arcane display of virility if ever there was one. The spell barely misses Pike and slams into a row of seven skeletons with five of them being destroyed.

On the other side of the wall, skeletons converge on the party but are being repelled by Yennen's group, the cleric himself casting Destroy Undead as well. He shouts to the party, "You! Don't worry! We got this! You do what you must! It has begun! Finish it!". With that, he jumps into the fray, shield and holy symbol in his hands. As the surviving skeletons converge on Pike, Vax jumps off the wall and gets to her, decking one of the skeletons with his right fist which has the symbol of Sarenrae sewn into the glove. The skeleton shrugs off the weak attack. Grog enters the fray with his Firebrand Warhammer attached to the Chain of Returning and smashes three of them with relative ease. Grog then pulls the hammer out of the slick mud back to him as he licks it off, his tongue burning due to the warhammer's hot surface. Over time, they pick off the remaining four on their side.

I dunno, is that too long for a synopsis? I'm still new at this (lol) 